Comic for Wednesday, July 1st
Jul01
I regret how little screen time each character gets sometimes – I’m pretty sure that Mium just doubled his spoken lines in the comic.
The less said about the art the better. Lets just chalk it up to awkward transition periods still. Sorry. I think I’m going to look into ways of handling backgrounds better.
I wonder where the rest of the class is?
I can’t remember if Kallisto is referring to Mium by the right last name. I seem to remember it being something else, but what?
Well, that’s his last name on the character page… that he registered at the school with… there’s a distinct possibility it’s not the only thing he’s referred to by, though š
Insulting your employees is how you get them to turn into opponents.
The only thing that is off about the art is her hands. the poses and everything else is great. your art is it’s own style instead of following the trends set by the media so it can’t be compared to what other people have done. that said i like a comic with ok art and a great story better than a comic with great art and a mediocre story, but if it’s great on both i like it more. just keep improving on those hands and the rest will fall into place.
Yeah… I struggle a lot with hands. Particularly in that awkward middle range.
It’s really my goal to get both the art and the story in good order in time; I really appreciate all the people that are sticking with it on the journey to that point š
@eldestdawn: Your opinion about comics coincides exactly with mine, and that’s why I also love The Far Side of Utopia. ^^
It seems like he’s trolling her pretty hard. Does he have a sense of humor?
It almost seems that way, sometimes.
Does Kally have any suspicions about Mium’s nature? And is Mium being funny, or annoying (or possibly both)?
She probably doesn’t, beyond that he’s working with Peter. Mium’s nature isn’t a normal enough thing for to be readily suspected.
It’s hard to say what amuses Mium, but it is safe to say he’s rather peculiar.
At this point I think Mium is just having fun at her expense.