The Far Side of Utopia

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   Code Monkey

   January 26, 2018, 7:27 pm | # | Reply

   Moose Breath is correct on the comma; however, there should also be a hyphen in time-sensitive:
   http://www.dictionary.com/browse/time-sensitive
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   Moose Breath

   August 8, 2016, 9:42 pm | # | Reply

   In panel one, there needs to be a comma between “critical” and “time”. Those are two separate qualifiers, whereas “time sensitive” is a single qualifier.

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     PastUtopia

     August 8, 2016, 10:34 pm | # | Reply

     Thanks for the corrections! I will review and fix these when I get a chance.

     Edit: Fixed. Editing these old ones is a pain in the ass 😐 We are now beyond my grammar skills, but I’ll take your word for it 😛