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Comic for Wednesday, November 12th

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by PastUtopia on December 23, 2014 at 10:16 pm
Chapter: Chapter 0
Location: Far Side of Utopia
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  1. Code Monkey
    January 26, 2018, 7:22 pm | # | Reply

    1st panel, 2nd bubble: there doesn’t need to be a comma prior to ‘that,’ as it’s only the subsequent phrase that’s a temporary divergence from the main point, and that sentence already has an overabundance of commas… 😉

    Also, I agree with the very old previous comment that the second panel’s sentence should end with a question mark.

    I would recommend a semicolon in place of the comma in the 3rd sentence of panel 3 and save that comma for just prior to the ‘too’, but it’s not a big deal.

    The 2nd and 3rd sentences from panel 4 appear to be two halves of the same sentence…or maybe that’s a tiny comma I’m mistaking for a period..?

    (I won’t be offended if you ignore any/all of my recommendations; I just saw that people had previously commented on such things and I figured, as a new set of eyes on some very old pages, that perhaps my suggestions could be beneficial…)

    • PastUtopia
      January 28, 2018, 2:38 am | # | Reply

      Fixed, thanks. I don’t really ignore the comments on the old pages, but these older pages are harder to fix, so sometimes takes me a bit to get around to them (and I forget)… which is pretty close to ignoring it sometimes, I guess 🙂 , But I don’t mean to 😉

  2. Galadan
    August 10, 2015, 11:38 am | # | Reply

    In frame two, again use a question mark. 🙂

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