Intermission 3, Minus Years 2, Page 5
Dec04
Proves your credentials of what, I’m not sure.
So this week I’ll wrap up the last 2 pages of Minus Years, by end of day tomorrow the next story page will be up Patreon, so we’ll have something a buffer again. I expect that to get wrecked around Christmas, but at least this way there should be not update gap there. We’ll see.
Anyway, sorry for the long delay on the main story, these at least tide people over 🙂
I think I will continue to do the bonus comic series as half pages like these, I think it’s fairly maintainable and it works well for them.
Anyway, I’m back on not-a-tiny-rock-in-the-middle-of-the-ocean, so I will be going back and fixing the errors people noted on previous pages, will follow up in the comments there as I get ’em.
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“Also.. It stops bullets..” BRILLIANT!!
On the one hand, if a cop with a gun shows up saying I’m under arrest, I’m very likely to not resist that.
On the other hand, if a cop with a dragon shows up saying I’m under a arrest, it’s entirely possible I’d be asking if there’s anything I can do to help them arrest me….
Lol.
Step 1. Dragon ON!
Step 3. Make arrests.
How “Step 2” works out really depends on what type of criminals you are trying to arrest.
Having a dragon proves your credentials in the “massively overwhelming firepower” department.
And, more generally, “they brought a dragon to kick in the door/building. What do you think they’ll do if we try to resist?”
Oh, right, nervous rookie cop has a dragon. This is not a fun world for criminals.
It proves your credentials:
that you are a badass mage who has the ability to create a red construct, which proves badassedness, along with it being a dragon, which is even more badass.
Panel 2: you misspelled suspicion.
Fixed, thanks 🙂
first panel
“…try not to rip IT into to many pieces.”
That is the only thing I can see as maybe needing an edit here, but I am not the best proofreader.
Fixed, thanks 🙂