To be honest, I’m not really sure how it became Wednesday. All day I thought it was Tuesday, and that I was ahead of schedule. But then somehow it turned into Wednesday suddenly.

I probably shouldn’t say this, as being self-critical tends to just derail things, but I’m not quite happy with this page. I reckon I tried to put a little too much on one page, and it’s a little bit… choppy, as a result. I mean, it was supposed to be, to an extent, as the pace of events is becoming a bit more scattered and chaotic, but I think it’s probably a little too hard to make sense of.

I will try to pull back a to tune upcoming pages a bit better.

There’s a step where I go from my outline – which, while in order, tends to be a bit scattershot – to what will actually go in the panels. Usually I cut like… 1/3 to 1/2 of what is in the outline (as you can probably guess, brevity and me are not really buddies), but in some cases I sort of commit to having a little too much in the page.

I find it vaguely ironic that this exact issue was being discussed in the comments on last page.

I dunno, least there’s a lot of time before Monday, I’ll figure something out. I don’t think this actually a bad page, just more confusing than it had to be, which isn’t great as it contains a fair amount of fairly important things – which is the root of the problem, there was too many things from the outline of the page that I didn’t feel I could cut.

Anyway… I’m rambling, so going to hit post now!