Comic for Monday, February 2nd
Feb02
Color makes its first minor appereances in the background shading in the ongoing effort to make the backgrounds look more like the comic is set in a world that is not full of omnipresent fog.
Not much to say other than that. It’s been an interesting process writing this segment on Tyler and Amy and what they would piece together about whats happening at their academy.
“indentified” -> “identified”
Fixed, thanks.
Panel one : “wrong on, world?” note the comma
Fixed, thanks!
Frame three: the final word should be “then”, and I would suggest changing the word order to “have already”.
Corrections made!
To be honest, I’m not sure the difference between “have already” and “already have” but I’m going to go with your’s on this one as history isn’t on my side with this stuff 😉
Thanks for the comments and corrections 😀