Comic for Friday, November 14th Dec23 by PastUtopia on December 23, 2014 at 10:16 pm Chapter: Chapter 0Location: Far Side of Utopia
Moose Breath is correct on the comma; however, there should also be a hyphen in time-sensitive:
http://www.dictionary.com/browse/time-sensitive
In panel one, there needs to be a comma between “critical” and “time”. Those are two separate qualifiers, whereas “time sensitive” is a single qualifier.
Thanks for the corrections! I will review and fix these when I get a chance.
Edit: Fixed. Editing these old ones is a pain in the ass 😐 We are now beyond my grammar skills, but I’ll take your word for it 😛