Comic for Monday, October 20th

Dec23

by PastUtopia on December 23, 2014 at 10:08 pm

Chapter: Chapter 0

Location: Far Side of Utopia

Comic was updated 12-21-2015; you can view the original here.

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Stacts

September 5, 2016, 7:29 pm | # | Reply

I’m sorry but… I actually like the dialogue in the original better than the updated version.
- PastUtopia
  
  September 5, 2016, 8:34 pm | # | Reply
  
  Definitely a valid possibility. I tend to tinker with things, sometimes they’ll be better sometimes they’ll be worse. In general I aim to make things easier to read / slightly less cryptic, especially on these early pages.
Galadan

August 10, 2015, 11:08 am | # | Reply

Hi!
On the page before this you said you’d like to be told about errors we spot, so I thought I’d mention that it should be “you’re going to” in the second frame, and “you don’t like” and “overwhelmed” in the third (and probably “it’s on” or “it is on” in the first). 🙂
- PastUtopia
  
  August 10, 2015, 2:51 pm | # | Reply
  
  Corrections made! Thank you for the rundown!
  
  I appreciate the comment and the corrections! 🙂
Dreadogastus

March 16, 2015, 4:15 pm | # | Reply

Hi there M. Reed. I followed a Project Wonderful ad to your site. Read the ABOUT and said this looks interesting; The wide-angle setting, your personal quest to stay fed and maybe even do something cool.
(with respect) I liked the first few pages AND each one had at lest one small thing that interfered with my enjoyment. When I read this page, “All right this is what he is aiming for!” I mean, hacking secure comms to tell a young wizard, new head of a sec. agency branch, about an inter-dimensional intruder !? Cool stuff!!
I will be following your story.
- PastUtopia
  
  March 16, 2015, 5:51 pm | # | Reply
  
  Hi! Glad you stuck with it and found some enjoyment with the story.
  
  It started incredibly rough – I really hope to come back and redo a lot of those pages someday to clean up the flow, art, and some of the just blatant mistakes; maybe even draw the backgrounds. 🙂
  
  Fortunately I (think) the newer pages are less painful, and I’m very slowly getting better each update – I’m pretty excited about started Chapter 2 on Wednesday – there is so much more cool stuff in store as the story goes on! 🙂