Not too much to say on this panel. The art is a little rough – I’m trying to crack down a little on spelling/grammar errors, from this page forward the pages will at least be spell checked in their final typeset form (previously I was typesetting in photoshop rather than pasting from a word document for the final dialogue of the page).

I got a few reviews on the comic – they pretty much slammed, but that’s okay. It made it a little bit harder to work on for a bit, but at the end of the day I write this for fun and to get better at art, so…

Still, there was some valid points. I will be working to change the layout of pages in particular. I’ve sort of been operating on this 3 by 3 grid, but there isn’t really much point in sticking to that religiously. Also, I think I need to push a little harder on the art – while I do limit the time I spend per page, more I will sacrifice number of panels for more detailed or better panels.